Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Overall I would rate the quality of the feedback I am getting from other students in class about 7/10 and improving! I am finding that the more ideas they give me on how to revise my story the easier it is for my imagination to start running. I hope that as time goes on people will become more comfortable telling me specific changes that they want to see.

I would say that the feedback I am leaving for others is relatively 7/10 and improving as well! I have found that using the WWW technique helps me to better give feedback to others.

Blog comments have been a great way for me to get to know people. By reading others introductions I am able to relate to all of them on a level unlike any other online course.

Looking forward I want to continue to add to my WWW feedback comments to help others and I hope that others continue to express their ideas to me.

Key to Success: Pixy.org

I chose this picture because I think that feedback is in fact the key to success. Without feedback we are unaware of the faults that we need to fix and in turn do not fix them. This leads to mediocracy.

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Hello! My name is Brooklynn and I am currently a Freshman, sophomore, and junior at OU. Beginning the summer before my junior year of high school I began taking concurrent classes at Northern Oklahoma college, in order to get some of my basic courses out of the way. By the time my senior year rolled around I was on track to actually receive my associates degree 20 days before my high school diploma. In March of 2020 my plans, as well as everyone else's, took a turn. The dreaded COVID took away both of the days I had worked so hard for. Although both of my graduations were taken away from me, I still finished the year and received my degree in Biology Pre-Med, I then went on to attended OU. Being that this year was my first year of college out of high school, I began as a "freshman", starting with 60 credit hours classifying me as a junior, and changing my major to Psychology Pre-Med now puts me as a sophomore. All very confusing, I know! I have always been the type of pe...

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End of the World: Pixabay Population Control: The year is 2070. The world's population is 12 billion and continues to grow. The United States government was overthrown only a few years prior and all of their secrets have been released. A cure for cancer had been found in the year 2011 only to kept away, But that wasn't the only population control plan found during the revolution. The United States had been poisoning us for years, causing the human lifespan to be drastically shorter than it could. Once all of these measures were stopped the death rate dropped drastically and the human lifespan increased by what is estimated to be 50 years. But now we are running out of room. The Sequel: The scientist have estimated the world only has a few months left before it becomes completely unlivable. Fresh Water has become almost nonexistent and climate change has made growing crops impossible. China has found a way to send people to Mars. So now we must all fight to get on one of rocket...

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